I’m One of the muses, A common wood nymph roaming around Parnassus, Happy with my little sweet pea. With her delicate, fragrant flowers Carried on long, slim stalks, She captivated me. I ran to her flaming with desire. I am flaming. Burning Blazing with desire. Too hot for my sweet pea. Because she’s so delicate, So delicate for me. As I touch her, she transformed into ashes. I burnt her. And out of a haze, you were formed. Like smoke given out by fire. A fireweed that sprang up in the burnt over area. A replacement, I thought. You quenched my thirst. Suffuse my hunger. My desire. I came to you for a crown And you gave me a kingdom. You made me eat on a golden plate And drink from your cup of diamonds. But like a common pitcher plant, Cut your base open And there you’ll find my body’s remains trapped inside. A pitfall in the middle of the forest. I will name you Venus? The goddess with a seducing brilliant red trap. Open to all beings that needs nurturing. Show your bosom and all will crave for your milk. From a butterfly, you turned me to an ant. When I brushed only slightly against your skin, You closed within an instant. Rigid spines on the margins of you blades interlock tightly. As soon as I was trapped, You digested me. Used me as a nutrient material. I know this is about to last for only a week. By the time your leaf reopens, You’ll be reedy for other sufferers. Trapped inside, I accepted my fate. Then there she came one spring day. My little delicate sweet pea. Now a spring beauty in full bloom. A low perennial herb. With narrow, succulent leaves And loose cluster of white and pink flowers. But your leaf has closed. I cannot escape.

Broken Destiny: Chapter 1  


I just had this vivid dream about Momusu... I might as well write it now before my 1 kb memory attacks again. My dream is somewhat "telenovela" style. Nyahahahaha. Expect some drama thing... Try to guess who the characters are. I had a feeling that this will be a long fic... Maybe 10-20 chapters. The first chapter is somewhat short but still, I hope you like it! :)

Chapter 1

“There she is again… The girl with a mysterious personality. I hope I can get to know her better…”

“Hi! Is this seat taken?”
“Can I seat here?”
“… Suit yourself…”
“Ano sa…”
“I’m going now…”

“That was a fast conversation… Why does she always go away when someone wanted to talk to her? I want to know her… Her enigmatic personality draws me to her.”

It was almost a year when that girl transferred to this school. She was in the same class as mine. We’re both in grade 5 that time. All throughout the year, some of our classmates have attempted to befriend her, but it seems, she doesn’t want to have any. She just sits alone in the corner of the room, beside the window, looking outside. I promise that this year, I will make her my friend. And besides, no one can resist my charms.

“You’re the cream section of this batch. Just keep up the good work and you will graduate in this school with flying colors…. Enjoy your last year of stay here in our school! Don’t forget about our assignment for tomorrow. Class dismissed.”

“Its lunch time now… She will sit again in that place. I must befriend her now!”

“Hi! Can I sit here?”

“…Suit yourself…”

“Hey, do you know how to do our assignment in Math?”
“She has a cute face when her eyebrows are arching like that!”

“Why are you looking at me like that? You don’t know how to solve it too?”

“I know. It’s just that it’s weird to hear that coming from our batch’s valedictorian.”

“Hey, I have my weaknesses too! And that is Math… I hate numbers…”

“You can ask the others how to solve that.”

“But I want to ask you. You’re grade in Math is much higher than mine… And besides… You’re the salutatorian of our batch!”

“Thanks for the remark… I’m going now…”

“Ehh? But you’ve just taken a sit here a while ago..”

“I’m already finished so I’ll go now…”

“There she goes again… I will not give up this time.”

“Matte!!! I’ll go straight to the point… I want to be friends with you.”

“There are other people to bother, but why me?”

“Well, you see. I’ve noticed that you don’t talk to anyone here in school. Likewise, you don’t seem to have any friend that’s why I decided to befriend you.”

“Thanks for the concern, but I want to be alone. Please don’t bother me. I have other things to do.”

“There’s a saying that 'no man’s an island’. It means that people cannot live alone. I may give up with you today but, this will not be the last time that you will see me. Remember this… I will make you my friend… Goto-san.”
I suck at writing drama fics.. XD

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4 comments: to “ Broken Destiny: Chapter 1

  • mystery
    30 June 2007 at 11:39 AM  

    who is another person?

  • cogi_yoshi
    1 July 2007 at 5:37 PM  

    I already revelaed it on the second chapter... It's Rika.. But it's not finalized, You'll see. The plot's really complicated. I wonder how I managed to dream a fic like that. :)

  • mystery
    3 July 2007 at 2:18 AM  

    yeah, i also dream about them one time but it never finish.

  • cogi_yoshi
    3 July 2007 at 1:23 PM  

    You're rigth! Actually, in this fic. I'll be the one to decide what will be the ending... Hehehehe. I was writing my 4th chapter... but I was also writing the climax, I think it will be the 15th or something chapter of the said fic. I hope I can finish it this July... Because I'll start my cross over comedy fic of Johnny's entertainment and Morning Musume. XD


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